I thought you were going to write about these books in order to investigate why exactly men are so interested in them. (As a man, you have a pretty good position to do so.) Offering a sympathetic male perspective on what seems to be understood very differently across the spectrum, although I am hesitant to say across the gender spectrum because I haven’t seen actual evidence of the male-majority for Peterson, only articles claiming this.
However, all you’ve done is go through the book and give women some legitimation (did they ask you for that?) in blaming some sort of failing relationship not just on their other half, but on a book they read, like the man has no free will!
I fear you are pursuing writerly fame more than truth.